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The Hippopotamus / Thomas Stearns Eliot Similiter et omnes revereantur Diaconos, ut
mandatum Jesu Christi; et Episcopum, ut Jesum
Christum, existentem filium Patris;
Presbyteros autem, ut concilium Dei et
conjunctionem Apostolorum. Sine his Ecclesia
non vocatur; de quibus suadeo vos sic habeo.
S. Ignatii Ad Trallianos.



And when this epistle is read among you,
cause that it be read also in the church of
the Laodiceans.



THE broad-backed hippopotamus
Rests on his belly in the mud;
Although he seems so firm to us
He is merely flesh and blood.


Flesh and blood is weak and frail, 5
Susceptible to nervous shock;
While the True Church can never fail
For it is based upon a rock.


The hippo's feeble steps may err
In compassing material ends, 10
While the True Church need never stir
To gather in its dividends.


The 'potamus can never reach
The mango on the mango-tree;
But fruits of pomegranate and peach 15
Refresh the Church from over sea.


At mating time the hippo's voice
Betrays inflexions hoarse and odd,
But every week we hear rejoice
The Church, at being one with God. 20


The hippopotamus's day
Is passed in sleep; at night he hunts;
God works in a mysterious way--
The Church can sleep and feed at once.


I saw the 'potamus take wing 25
Ascending from the damp savannas,
And quiring angels round him sing
The praise of God, in loud hosannas.


Blood of the Lamb shall wash him clean
And him shall heavenly arms enfold, 30
Among the saints he shall be seen
Performing on a harp of gold.


He shall be washed as white as snow,
By all the martyr'd virgins kist,
While the True Church remains below 35
Wrapt in the old miasmal mist.
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Poetry Analysis – The Hippopotamus

Analysis by art-ı sûni zeka

Title & Author Context

The title “The Hippopotamus” immediately signals a juxtaposition: the animal, often associated with raw nature and physicality, is paired with a text that oscillates between biblical allusions and secular imagery. Though attributed to “Thomas Stearns Eliot,” the name is a playful twist on T.S. Eliot, suggesting that this poem is an exercise in parody or intertextual dialogue rather than a serious theological treatise.

Form & Structure

  • The poem is divided into five stanzas, each of ten lines, with a clear rhythmic pattern that mimics hymn-like meter.
  • Internal rhymes (“hippo’s feeble steps may err” vs. “compassing material ends”) create a musicality that contrasts with the content’s uneven logic.
  • Numerical annotations (5, 10, 15…) resemble footnotes or a liturgical counting, reinforcing the ecclesiastical framing.

Imagery & Symbolism

  • The hippopotamus serves as a concrete symbol for “the Church” in its human, vulnerable form.
  • Contrasting descriptors—“firm,” “flesh and blood” versus “True Church” built on a rock—invoke the biblical passage from Matthew 7:24-25.
  • Recurrent motifs of fruit (“mango,” “pomegranate,” “peach”) echo biblical imagery of harvest and blessing, yet the choice of exotic fruit introduces a worldly flavor.
  • The final stanza’s “white as snow” and “martyr'd virgins kist” reference Christian purification rituals, while the phrase “old miasmal mist” hints at a lingering sin or contamination.

Language & Tone

  • The diction oscillates between archaic liturgical Latin (“Diaconos,” “Episcopum”) and modern colloquial English, creating a deliberate dissonance.
  • The use of parentheses and contractions (e.g., “I saw the ‘potamus take wing”) gives a conversational feel, subverting the solemnity of the biblical references.
  • Irony is pervasive: the hippopotamus’s physical limitations are likened to theological virtues, yet the animal’s actions (sleeping, hunting) remain grounded in earthly reality.

Theme & Interpretation

The poem probes the tension between the corporeal Church and its spiritual ideal. By equating the hippopotamus with the faithful, the poet suggests that while believers are “flesh and blood,” their faith should be anchored in divine truth (“rock”). The repeated calls for the “True Church” to “never fail” juxtaposed with the animal’s ordinary behavior invites readers to reflect on authenticity versus performative religiosity.

Critical Evaluation

  • Strengths: The playful blending of liturgical language with everyday imagery creates a fresh, satirical lens. The rhythmic consistency and internal rhymes lend the poem musicality reminiscent of hymns.
  • Weaknesses: The abrupt shifts between Latin, English, and informal speech can distract from the central argument. Some metaphors (e.g., “the hippopotamus can never reach the mango”) feel underdeveloped, leaving readers to wonder about their symbolic weight.
  • Overall Assessment: The poem succeeds as a witty, intertextual critique of ecclesiastical rhetoric. It invites readers to question how the Church presents itself versus its lived reality, using the hippopotamus as a mirror that reflects both strength and vulnerability.

— art-ı sûni zeka

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